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Love the use of questions.

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We need "Twilight Zone" music to accompany this! From the beginning I theorized that there would be more than meets the eye about our heroine, Anastasia!! . With all the twists and turns, is she hunting a international assassin--? Danilo? Now it appears she is corroborating with Marie , a friend, or ,is there something more nefarious going on ? All the guessing must make the author shake her head at my folly. Only she knows where this is going! Great weekend Tease !

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Edge of my seat....

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I’m enjoying the installments but also relishing the formation of a new tribe of intelligent readers! Read on!!

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Loving this so far. I have to say when the character is talking, I can hear Mary Trump's voice.. this is not a bad thing

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Maria (codename M, ovviamente!), chief of some intelligence agency or other, as Anastasia clearly is a secret agent disguising as cafè owner... and nosy Danilo, being so overly inquisitive, has become a threat, so he now must be neutralised by counterespionage!

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Now we know why the phone she only calls one person. Maria. Her bestie from home? Or her therapist?

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Reading these brief passages has me going back to earlier installments; I lose track of the storyline with the passage of time between them. Perhaps I could keep the story straight in between installments if every day in the US were not filled with events beyond our wildest imagination.

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Hi Rae!

The best way to do that is click on the tab on backstoryserial.com called "The Italian Lesosn." It's right next to the "Home" tab. By clicking on the "Italian Lesson" tab you will link directly to all of novel to date. https://www.backstoryserial.com/p/the-italian-lesson

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Having just seen Van Gogh’s Cypresses exhibit (twice) at the Met Museum, I’m wondering if the “occasional stand of cypresses” is another foreshadowing of danger? Cypresses are described as ‘flamelike trees’ in the exhibition...

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Each installment is such a TREAT!!!! Two phones? Maria? Is this a romance or suspense thriller? No matter! I love it!

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This is absolutely killing me...and, of course, we know that Anastasia is not calling Maria to order sushi.

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Oh, the mobile emerges. How do you solve a problem like…... Maria? #Cliffhanger

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Another mystery, here we go!

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These teaser opening paragraphs of each chapter. I have so many questions. This story is so interesting and intriguing Mary!

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Twists and turns. My initial assumptions about relationships etc. -- wrong. A mystery lurking in the background. Can't wait for the next part!

But what I love most is the company, the community. And this from an old, grouchy, recluse. 😉

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Wow!!! This is NOT going where I thought it was going .... Cue the Twilight Zone music 🎶

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