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Polly Sears's avatar

We need "Twilight Zone" music to accompany this! From the beginning I theorized that there would be more than meets the eye about our heroine, Anastasia!! . With all the twists and turns, is she hunting a international assassin--? Danilo? Now it appears she is corroborating with Marie , a friend, or ,is there something more nefarious going on ? All the guessing must make the author shake her head at my folly. Only she knows where this is going! Great weekend Tease !

Joan's avatar

I’m enjoying the installments but also relishing the formation of a new tribe of intelligent readers! Read on!!

Joanna's avatar

Loving this so far. I have to say when the character is talking, I can hear Mary Trump's voice.. this is not a bad thing

Giorgia Meschini's avatar

Maria (codename M, ovviamente!), chief of some intelligence agency or other, as Anastasia clearly is a secret agent disguising as cafè owner... and nosy Danilo, being so overly inquisitive, has become a threat, so he now must be neutralised by counterespionage!

Kimberly Montgomery (CA)'s avatar

Now we know why the phone she only calls one person. Maria. Her bestie from home? Or her therapist?

Rae Ann Herman's avatar

Reading these brief passages has me going back to earlier installments; I lose track of the storyline with the passage of time between them. Perhaps I could keep the story straight in between installments if every day in the US were not filled with events beyond our wildest imagination.

Cathy L's avatar

Having just seen Van Gogh’s Cypresses exhibit (twice) at the Met Museum, I’m wondering if the “occasional stand of cypresses” is another foreshadowing of danger? Cypresses are described as ‘flamelike trees’ in the exhibition...

Kathryn Phillips's avatar

Each installment is such a TREAT!!!! Two phones? Maria? Is this a romance or suspense thriller? No matter! I love it!

Stacey L Graham's avatar

This is absolutely killing me...and, of course, we know that Anastasia is not calling Maria to order sushi.

Anna Dickie's avatar

Oh, the mobile emerges. How do you solve a problem like…... Maria? #Cliffhanger

MARTHA ESKEW's avatar

Another mystery, here we go!

Carrie Maxwell's avatar

These teaser opening paragraphs of each chapter. I have so many questions. This story is so interesting and intriguing Mary!

Jessica Rath's avatar

Twists and turns. My initial assumptions about relationships etc. -- wrong. A mystery lurking in the background. Can't wait for the next part!

But what I love most is the company, the community. And this from an old, grouchy, recluse. 😉

Pamela's avatar

Wow!!! This is NOT going where I thought it was going .... Cue the Twilight Zone music 🎶