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Diana Lindquist's avatar

I think we need a third episode to be enticed into buying this serial. Give me a chapter with a cliffhanger and I’ll be hooked. So far we’ve met a few women and heard about some yarn and some beauty in the location.

What’s the hook?

I’m inclined to support this because of who you (creative team) are (🥰) and because Joyce Vance recommended your project.

But couldn’t you try a little harder before I give up 50 of my very meager old lady dollars?

I’d rather be sucked in by your story than your celebrity.

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E. Jean Carroll's avatar

Diana! Hail! You're right, we all love cliffhangers! And Mary's got cliffhangers, twists, dark turns, and evil swerves coming up, not to mention a couple of villains. But, Mary, Jen and I are old school. We like setting the scene and getting to know the characters before Mary starts hurtling them towards that cliff!

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Pamela's avatar

I have not been able to read #3 yet!! An AC Unit in AZ is as essential as breathing. Ours decided to flip us off - well flip

The breaker off - because the compressor decided to choose the hottest day so far & a SATURDAY- to take it’s own life!!

The prick could have had the decency to wait until a week day, but noooo!

I will get there- hopefully tomorrow!! I REALLY Need that Italian .. Lesson!!

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E. Jean Carroll's avatar

Pamela!! Good luck!! Hope to see you soonest!

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Pamela's avatar

😘😘😘😉💖

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